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Fix Our Eyes on Jesus

Fix Our Eyes on Jesus
Samara Allen
Sunday, 28 September 2025

[Verse 1]
Long ago the prophets spoke,
Shadows cast and promises told,
But now the Son has made it plain,
The radiance of God’s own name.
High Priest who knows our every need,
Through His blood we are made free.

[Chorus]
Fix our eyes on Jesus,
Author of our faith,
Greater than the angels,
The cross became His place.
Seated with the Father,
Forever He will reign,
Fix our eyes on Jesus,
The Lamb for sinners slain.

[Verse 2]
By faith the ancients walked the road,
Trusting God though not yet shown.
We run the race they set before,
With Christ our joy, our great reward.
Better covenant, better way,
Hope unshaken, here to stay.

[Chorus]
Fix our eyes on Jesus,
Author of our faith,
Greater than the angels,
The cross became His place.
Seated with the Father,
Forever He will reign,
Fix our eyes on Jesus,
The Lamb for sinners slain.

[Bridge]
A kingdom unshaken,
A fire that remains,
Our God is consuming,
Forever the same.
So lift up your voices,
With boldness draw near,
For mercy is waiting,
Our Saviour is here.

[Final Chorus]
Fix our eyes on Jesus,
Our Saviour, strong and true.
The finisher of faith,
Who makes all things new.
Lifted high in glory,
Forever we will sing,
Fix our eyes on Jesus,
Our Prophet, Priest, and King.

recording on Suno

Disclaimer

Some lyrics have been generated by AI. The concept, themes and narrative arc are Samara Allen's; AI just helped with some word smithing.

Quiet Song

Quiet Song
Warwick Allen
Saturday, 20 September 2025

[Verse 1]
My love, o, see my love.
It's feeble, not enough,
Strong in thought, weak in deed,
It is not all you need.
It's all I have. It's true.
My love, it's all for you.

[Chorus]
Through the grief and the pain,
Through loss in place of gain,
Through the valley, dark and long,
My love is my quiet song.

[Verse 2]
My love, my true desire,
You, dear, raise me higher
Than what I could've known
Doing life on my own.
You're who I need, it's true,
I'm better because of you.

[Chorus]
Through the grief and the pain,
Through loss in place of gain,
Through the valley, dark and long,
My love is my quiet song.

[Verse 3]
Sometimes hidden and silent,
My love's never absent,
My love, weak and wanting,
Your needs not meeting.
In my weakness, it's true,
I strive to serve you.

[Chorus]
Through the grief and the pain,
Through loss in place of gain,
Through the valley, dark and long,
My love is my quiet song.

[Verse 4]
One thing you know, my dear,
I'm not going anywhere.
Blessed through all life's strife
By my beautiful wife.
My eyes, they're always true,
My heart, it's just for you.

[Chorus]
Through the grief and the pain,
Through loss in place of gain,
Through the valley, dark and long,
My love is my quiet song.

[Coda]
We, together, two lie;
We, together, have heat.
We on the Lord rely;
Three, then, won't be beat.
We, a cord of three strands;
We, in Him, can stand.

recording on Suno

Two

Two
Warwick Allen
Wednesday, 29 January 2003

[Verse 1]
Me plus you, that makes two
So two we'll be: you plus me.
What'll we do, us who are two?
We'll cross the sea, and go to Italy!
Vino Italiano for me and you.

[Verse 2]
What'll be there, how will we fare
Two who are one, under the Roman sun?
I know not my dear, but this I'll share:
No ill will come, where'er we run.
There's naught to fear, for we're in the care
Of Father, Ghost and Son—Three who are One!
So let's go, let us dare, me with my lady fair.

recording on Suno

Together, Forever

Together, Forever
Warwick Allen
Wednesday, 1 January 2003

[Verse 1]
Take my heart, I'll take yours
Take my life, just as it is
Take my hand, we'll take a step
Let us walk, together, forever

[Verse 2]
Make a start, you with me
On this road, me with you
Let it be, just how it will
As we walk, together, forever

[Verse 3]
Let me lead, when I will
Let me follow, when need be
Let us stay, hand in hand
As we walk, together, forever

[Bridge]
The walk uncertain
The road unknown
But a light unto our path
Will show where we're going

[Verse 4]
On the Christ, we'll fix our gaze
To the Lord, we'll turn our hearts
Where He leads, there we'll go
As we walk, together, forever

[Verse 5]
When it ends, this walk of ours
It will have only just begun
A new road through eternity
We will walk, together, forever

recording on Suno

Analysis of Together, Forever

Structure and Form

The song employs a five-verse structure with a bridge, creating an extended narrative arc that mirrors the journey it describes. The consistent refrain "As we walk, together, forever" functions as both a musical anchor and thematic touchstone, reinforcing the central metaphor of life as a shared pilgrimage. The addition of the bridge between verses three and four creates a crucial pivot point, introducing uncertainty before resolving into divine guidance.

Thematic Development

The lyrics demonstrate a sophisticated progression from the purely personal to the transcendent. The opening verses establish a covenant between two individuals through imperative language ("Take my heart," "Make a start"), evolving into reciprocal partnership ("Let me lead," "Let me follow"). This human-centred foundation then expands to encompass divine relationship in verse four, where "the Christ" becomes the focal point of their shared journey.

The bridge serves as a theological and literary hinge, acknowledging the fundamental uncertainty of human experience ("The walk uncertain / The road unknown") whilst affirming providential guidance. This tension between doubt and faith reflects a mature spirituality that acknowledges life’s ambiguities whilst maintaining trust in divine direction.

Metaphorical Framework

The central metaphor of walking functions on multiple levels: the literal act of two people moving together, the metaphorical journey of a romantic relationship, and the spiritual pilgrimage of faith. The progression from "take a step" to "this walk of ours" to "a new road through eternity" creates an expanding temporal scope that encompasses both immediate commitment and eschatological hope.

The shift from "road" in the early verses to "path" in the bridge, then back to "road" in the final verse, suggests different qualities of the journey—roads being constructed and travelled by many, whilst paths suggest more intimate, personal routes requiring guidance.

Religious and Romantic Integration

The lyrics navigate the complex intersection of romantic love and religious devotion with remarkable sophistication. Rather than treating these as competing loyalties, the text presents them as mutually reinforcing. The romantic commitment gains depth and permanence through its grounding in shared faith, whilst religious devotion finds expression through committed partnership.

The capitalised "Christ" and "Lord" in verse four mark a theological declaration, but one that emerges organically from the relational foundation established earlier. This integration suggests that human love, properly understood, points beyond itself to divine love.

Temporal Dimensions

The song’s treatment of time moves from present commitment through future uncertainty to eternal perspective. The final verse’s paradox—"When it ends, this walk of ours / It will have only just begun"—employs eschatological imagery that transforms temporal limitation into infinite possibility. The phrase "through eternity" elevates the relationship beyond mortal constraints whilst maintaining its essential character as a shared journey.

Language and Tone

The diction remains accessible whilst avoiding sentimentality. The repeated use of "Let" constructions creates a tone of invitation rather than demand, suggesting mutual submission rather than dominance. The simple, direct language mirrors the straightforward commitment being described, whilst the religious terminology in verse four maintains reverence without lapsing into archaic formality.

Conclusion

These lyrics succeed in creating a unified vision of romantic and spiritual commitment that avoids the pitfalls of either secular romanticism or disembodied spirituality. The walking metaphor provides coherence whilst allowing for growth and development. The result is a text that functions effectively as both popular song and contemporary hymn, speaking to couples seeking to ground their relationship in shared faith whilst remaining accessible to broader audiences.

Shadows of Deceit

Shadows of Deceit
Warwick Allen
Sunday, 24 January 1999

What strange tricks the light can play
Oh, how one can be fooled by illusions
Created at certain angles

From where I stand, it surely seems
That you're atop a tower
A magnificent, strong and mighty tower

This tower you've built yourself
With bricks of hard work
Bound with mortar of love

You're still building
Steadily climbing higher
Destined to reach giddy heights

Why then does it look to you
That you're in a well
That you have to rise to reach the ground

Please come and stand beside me
In the light, where you can see
Don't be fooled by the shadows any longer

But please take care
With the foundations on which you build
Lest your tower come crashing down

Make your foundations of rock
Nothing else will be strong enough
Build on the Rock and reach heavenward

All is Well with My Soul

All is Well with My Soul
Warwick Allen
Wednesday, 25 February 1998

Original poem (1998)

I feel my soul
Is in need of nourishment
But deep within me
I hear the whisper
The gentle whisper
Of the Spirit of God

A thick cloud has enveloped me
Cold mist has surrounded me
Only some
Of the joyful banter of friends
Of their light
Filters through
And it's muffled
Dampened by the darkness
And through that darkness
They only
See part of me

But the whisper remains
Continuing to encourage

My heart is heavy
Anxiety, fear of failure
Letting others down
Weigh on my mind
And my body
Is reluctant to move

But still I hear the whisper
That blessed whisper
And I know
All is well with my soul

Song arrangement (2025)

[Verse 1]
I feel my soul
Is in need of nourishment
But deep within me
I hear the whisper
The gentle whisper
Of the Spirit of God

[Refrain]
And the whisper remains
Continuing to encourage

[Verse 2]
A thick cloud has enveloped me
Cold mist has surrounded me
Only some
Of the joyful banter of friends
Of their light
Filters through

[Chorus 1]
Their joy is muffled
Dampened by the darkness
And through that darkness
They only
See part of me

[Refrain]
But the whisper remains
Continuing to encourage

[Verse 3]
My heart is heavy
Anxiety, fear of failure
Letting others down
Weigh on my mind
And my body
Is reluctant to move

[Coda]
But still I hear the whisper
That blessed whisper
And I know
All is well with my soul

recording on Suno

Sonnet of the Stone

Sonnet of the Stone
Warwick Allen
Friday, 22 August 1997

[Stanza 1]
The weight of the stone, around my heart bound
Is not enough to pull me under, but
Just enough for the chains, my soul to cut
And the load to keep my dreams on the ground.
Sometimes I stand tall, my strength I have found,
But often strength I've none, I'm in a rut,
I long for a haven, a lonely hut
Where, onto a page, my fears and doubts mound.

[Stanza 2]
From this safe place, I cry my forlorn plea
To my Lord, I ask Him to take the stone.
He hears, but He is teaching me to wait.
He wants to use me, now He's moulding me,
Yet He still lets me know I'm not alone,
And from my shoulders He will lift the weight.

recording on Suno

Hole

Hole
Warwick Allen
Thursday, 14 March 1996

Am I falling
Or am I jumping
I think I jumped

This hole is too big for me
I cannot see the top
I haven't yet hit the bottom

Did I jump
Or was I pushed
I think I jumped

If only I had a rope
Maybe I could climb the rope
At least I would stop going down

I'm still falling
I don't like falling
I think I jumped

Will you be my rope
You are strong
You won't break when I climb

I did jump
But I had help
Why did I jump

My Lord be my rope
So I won't fall
I can climb I won't jump

They said they wouldn't let me slip
But they pushed
I think I jumped

I will see the light
When I reach the top
Of this hole

recording on Suno

Analysis of Hole

Literary Analysis

This poem employs a powerful extended metaphor of falling into a hole to explore themes of agency, responsibility, and spiritual seeking. The structure itself mirrors the speaker’s psychological state—the repetitive, cycling nature of the verses echoes the mental loops of someone trying to process a traumatic experience or difficult life circumstance.

The poem’s most striking literary device is the refrain "I think I jumped," which appears with slight variations throughout. This repetition creates a haunting uncertainty that drives the entire piece. The speaker’s inability to definitively state whether they jumped or were pushed becomes the central tension, reflecting the complex nature of personal responsibility in situations where external pressures and internal choices intersect.

The poem progresses through distinct emotional stages: initial confusion and disorientation, desperate seeking for help, spiritual turning, betrayal and realisation, and finally hope for redemption. The imagery shifts from secular (rope, climbing) to spiritual (“My Lord”) and back to interpersonal betrayal (“They said they wouldn’t let me slip / But they pushed”), creating a layered exploration of different sources of support and failure.

The simple, almost childlike language belies the sophisticated psychological portrait being painted. Short, declarative sentences mirror the speaker’s attempts to grasp onto concrete truths in a situation of profound uncertainty.

Psychological Analysis

From a psychological perspective, this poem presents a compelling portrait of trauma processing and the struggle with agency versus victimhood. The recurring uncertainty about jumping versus being pushed suggests someone grappling with a situation where their own choices may have contributed to their harm, but external pressures or manipulation were also present.

The repetitive structure mirrors the intrusive, cycling thoughts common in trauma responses. The speaker’s mind returns again and again to the central question of responsibility—a classic feature of psychological processing after difficult experiences, particularly those involving betrayal or abuse.

The progression from “Am I falling / Or am I jumping” to “I think I jumped” to “I did jump / But I had help” reveals the psychological journey from confusion to acknowledgment of complex causation. This reflects the therapeutic process of moving from black-and-white thinking to understanding the nuanced interplay between personal agency and external influence.

The search for a “rope”—first generally, then specifically from another person, then from “My Lord”—illustrates the human need for support systems and the progression many people make from secular to spiritual seeking when facing crisis. The betrayal (“They said they wouldn’t let me slip / But they pushed”) suggests a history of failed trust, possibly indicating relationship trauma or institutional betrayal.

The final movement toward hope (“I will see the light / When I reach the top”) suggests resilience and the possibility of recovery, though the speaker remains “in this hole,” indicating the ongoing nature of their struggle.

Integrated Interpretation

Both literary and psychological readings converge on this poem’s exploration of the complex relationship between choice and circumstance. The speaker appears to be processing an experience where they made decisions that led to harmful consequences, but within a context of manipulation, pressure, or betrayal by trusted others. The poem’s power lies in its refusal to provide easy answers about blame or responsibility. Instead, it captures the genuine confusion and self-examination that follows traumatic experiences, particularly those involving spiritual or relational betrayal. The hope that concludes the poem—seeing light, reaching the top—suggests not a simple resolution but a hard-won acceptance of the climb ahead. This work stands as both a literary achievement in its skillful use of metaphor and repetition, and as a psychologically astute portrait of trauma, responsibility, and the search for redemption.